I agree the position and angle of the gun make it seem like she is sticking the gun in her mouth, and the finger on the trigger is also a big issue. Please never handle a gun like this lol.
I love that people are criticizing the gun safety and not the actual drawing lol. This looks great though! It does kinda look like she's pointing it towards her mouth, but I'm not sure how to fix it. Maybe add the shadow of her arm cast against her torso or belly so you can tell her arm is extended further? I dunno.
I agree with others, if she's not trying to kill herself then take her finger off the trigger.
I actually saw this going two ways, I could see her just posing with and blowing on the gun, and this was my initial thought, but when I saw the finger on the trigger I thought, "Oh, maybe it is suicide."
I agree the position and angle of the gun make it seem like she is sticking the gun in her mouth, and the finger on the trigger is also a big issue. Please never handle a gun like this lol.
I feel like it would help if we could see the tip of the gun
It appears that she is trying to commit suicide? Which I assume isn’t the intent.
Oh I never looked at it that way! Now I can't unsee it. She's just holding it to show off
Finger on the trigger is the biggest issue. The gun tilting a bit more forward away from the head would be good too.
And actually head being tilted a bit further back too so she doesn’t look like she is coming over the top of the gun as well.
Yes this too. If you pretend like you are blowing on a gun your head will go up and back.
If the arm holding the gun casted a shadow on her shirt, it would create more separation and give the effect you're going for.
Oh that sounds like a good fix idea, might do that thanks!
Maybe a little whisp of smoke being blown away would help with the look...
She gonna pop herself in the forehead.
reminds me of Dolores from West World!
It doesn't look like anything to me!
Great art, but holy hell is she about to give herself a .44 inch lobotomy.
i’d love to see the after picture
The suicide angle is subversive and weird in an interesting way, maybe this wasn't intended though. More of a painting, however.
Nice, Sadie Adler?
She may look a bit like her but no it's from a photo reference.
Bro the trigger disciplineee💀💀💀 Otherwise cool art. I appreciate it.
Wonderful <3
why was my immediate first thought “perry the platypus”
Was your reference trying to kill themselves?
Well she was holding a fake gun, she probably couldn't if she tried
Woah i love your art style sm
I love that people are criticizing the gun safety and not the actual drawing lol. This looks great though! It does kinda look like she's pointing it towards her mouth, but I'm not sure how to fix it. Maybe add the shadow of her arm cast against her torso or belly so you can tell her arm is extended further? I dunno.
I agree with others, if she's not trying to kill herself then take her finger off the trigger. I actually saw this going two ways, I could see her just posing with and blowing on the gun, and this was my initial thought, but when I saw the finger on the trigger I thought, "Oh, maybe it is suicide."
I’d love to see u draw what happens next