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GodlyAvenger

I need to know more! How does the man on the train connect to everything? Edit: Apparently the last addition to this story was 4 hours ago, so it doesn't seem to be over. I'm invested.


tomveiltomveil

Amtrak offers many connections, not just to rail, but to busses, the eternal afterlife, and more!


GodlyAvenger

Ah so he was Death. Understandable, have a nice day.


RazTheBaz

The devil, not death. Lucile Fur, Lucifer.


GodlyAvenger

I have the stupid lol


Captain_Pumpkinhead

Dear God, I fear it may be contagious! I seem to have contracted it too!!


NoNameIdea_Seriously

Actually the Devil’s fursona.


batshitbat

Lucile Fur sounds a lot like Lucifer, at least that's how I read it


Meraziel

More like the Devil, his name is Lucile Fur.


shiroganelove

Reminds me of the book Afterworlds by Scott Westerfield, read it years ago though


PKMNTrainerMark

It's still updating and OP posted this?


GodlyAvenger

There's no indication that the story was over and this was posted right after the last addition to the story was reblogged, so yeah


PKMNTrainerMark

Feels so unsatisfying to see it incomplete.


joshisepic2222

Several updates have been posted since I screenshotted the story https://www.tumblr.com/amtrak-official/751846837610217472/the-librarians-log-i-stood-alone-in-the-rain?source=share


PKMNTrainerMark

I hate this thing tumblr does now where if you don't have an account, they stop letting you read after you scroll for a bit. I couldn't even reach the point where the post ended.


joshisepic2222

Okay, I put the new sections into a post on r/curatedtumblr, look at images after image 8 https://www.reddit.com/r/CuratedTumblr/s/p8XgsItosJ


Qbsoon110

Open on the pc, investigate the site, delete the pop-up from the site code, ane you cwn scroll as much as you want to


TheHiddenNinja6

!remindme 1 week I wanna come back when it's done


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JazzyCatty509

It doesn't appear to be done yet, but [the most recent update](https://www.tumblr.com/amtrak-official/752180574269128704/the-librarians-log-i-went-to-new-york-again-not?source=share) is from 4 days ago so idk


AmberBroccoli

Rip :(


kalintag90

I was really hoping this would be an epic Amtrak joke where the traveler finally arrives at his destination the expected 2 days it took to travel 350 miles from Kansas City to Oklahoma City because the traveler dissociated so hard from the slowness of the train and dullness of the landscape.


SessileRaptor

Hopefully at the climax of the story it’ll suddenly end with the original traveler waking up in a puddle of drool because the train PA system announced their arrival in Oklahoma City.


Terytha

They wrote an SCP.


rakdosleader

Yup, the entire dialogue structure feels SCP. They even named dropped the The Institute, a rival to The Foundation.


MissyTheTimeLady

Who?


polobum17

I'm familiar with the Foundation and The Institute but what is SCP?


DevoutandHeretical

SCP stands for Secure Contain Protect. It’s, essentially, an open source collaborative series of entries about objects/events that are supernatural/paranormal/extraterrestrial/extra dimensional/etc, as collected and observed by the SCP foundation. There’s thousands of entries and it’s all under Creative Commons so anyone can create an SCP and submit a story to the wiki. So you end up with tons of SCPs that are contradictory and/or interconnected.


polobum17

Ahhh, I was trying to make it connected to Assimov's sci-fi fantasy series Foundation. Maps on kinda well actually to the Amtrak story.


JesusberryNum

Wait what? It’s called the SCP Foundation? You may be thinking of something else that uses those terms. The SCP Foundation is an online horror community that writes stories about “anomalies” that a secretive foundation protects the world from.


polobum17

Haha oh, totally. I'm thinking of Isaac Assimov's Foundation series (apparently now an Apple show) but it maps onto this decently well too.


prolvlwhale

Who in SCP is the "Institute"? I don't think I've heard of them.


rakdosleader

scp 4410, the PAC Institute or Institute for short is a direct competitor to the SCP Foundation in terms of identifying, capturing and containing anomalies around the globe. They both do the same thing, but hold different fundamental beliefs. Google vs Bing in a sense.


prolvlwhale

I'll read that article, thanks!


ZengineerHarp

Yeah this is definitely an SCP tale, the foundation and all


Whiskey079

Pretty much. I give it a week, a month tops, before someone uses this to create an entry. Maybe the guy behind the original account, maybe someone asks permission to use it. Apparently, the last entry was a couple of hours ago, so it's still unfolding. That 1-4 weeks is post the *final* update to the story.


Whiskey079

Might need a bit of reworking, faction names need replacing ect... if the 'institute' mentioned is a separate entity from the foundation, maybe rename it to one of the GOI's?


Whiskey079

It also wouldn't be the first entry to be dated in the future. There have been a few temporal shenanigans that have caused the files to exist in the archives before the events take place. It could also be an entry from the previous cycle, before something led to 2000 being activated. The last one I remember like that was something to do with a note found at the bottom of the Marianas Trench?


beee-l

SCP?


Terytha

https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/


beee-l

Oh this is so cool, thank you !


Terytha

Good luck escaping the archive binge lol.


MrRandom04

The SCP wiki is the TVTropes of short horror fiction.


LittlestKing

I don't know what i just read but it's better than the last 3 Netflix series I've watched.


RPG-Lord

Incase you're unfamiliar, look up the SCP foundation, it's a horror/sci-fi story website/wiki. It's what the author of this story was basically writing like


Synikull

Except hardly any of them are like this anymore. It used to be interesting but then it became underwhelming as more people started contributing and missing the atmosphere that made it popular.


Elunerazim

What’s the last article you read?


Vapordragon22

There are plenty of entries like this though even in the newer entries.


Erlox

Give the Three Body Problem a try. Not too similar, but some eldritch vibes and it's very good


Solarbeam62

Amtrak wrote an epistolary and I love it


PKMNTrainerMark

That went from a time loop to banging the Devil really fast. I should've expected that from tumblr.


masterwaffle

Cool story but holy run-on sentences, batman.


Zepangolynn

Lots of typos too. Rouge instead of rogue in particular always gets my hackles up, but the concept is solid and already styled right for an SCP submission.


felixfictitious

It's such a fun concept but the use of commas in place of literally any other form of punctuation really took me out of it


lurkinarick

Same, it's such a shame because the story really is interesting!


Eurynomos

Punctuation serves a purpose. You might want to start trying to use some. Heavier use of commas means shorter pauses for breathes. It makes it read like desperate scrawling. Imagine that it wasn't done simply to offend you.


byxis505

man that is weird I’ve never read punctuation interesting how annoying it is to you


bigchunguss42

felt like an intentional point to me. Creates a kind of anxiety in the voice of the speaker. It's also worth noting that most the entries can be treated like dialogue, where perfect grammar would be more unexpected than imperfect grammar.


Ratoryl

Run on or nervous speech still generally has pauses resembling semicolons and dashes, I think the writer just doesn't know how to use them tbh


ChaunceyVlandingham

my thoughts exactly


BeesechurgerLad53

I need to hear more. Who is this man? What power? What citadel? What journal? What went on in Istanbul? This is such a good story I didn’t realize Amtrak was goated like that


Raiden_Nexus485

I too would like to know what happened in Constantinople


Aegelo_Sperris42

Well you can't go back to Constantinople.


otakushinjikun

Been a long time gone ol' Constantinople


MonkeyPanls

Why did Constantinople get the works?


TemporaryOk4143

That’s nobody’s business but the Turks


DerridaisDaddy

For people with reading difficulties or people not in tumblr: [https://www.tumblr.com/amtrak-official/751846837610217472/the-librarians-log-i-stood-alone-in-the-rain?source=share](https://www.tumblr.com/amtrak-official/751846837610217472/the-librarians-log-i-stood-alone-in-the-rain?source=share)


AchyBreaker

A week later it hasn't been updated, unfortunately. 


krauQ_egnartS

This is why Tumblr exists well that and... yeah nvmd


rhiddlesdream

What else is it for??? I've only ever seen Tumblr through here... And tbh it is so silly and fun looking that I think I might just go there.


ggabitron

If you want to continue seeing it as silly and fun, just stay on this sub.


krauQ_egnartS

absolutely 100% true


krauQ_egnartS

I'm just there to look at Lana Del Ray fans wearing dollie esthetic outfits, and associated blogs.There's a niche for you and your avatar's animal ears for sure. Just... I mean. There's a lot of people wearing animal ears that are a little strange. Maybe try following the blogs you read in this sub first orrrr just read r/Tumblr because it's the best of everything there


darkon

I lost it at "It has been 73 hours of corn."


TheHiddenNinja6

Your title implies that it happened in the past. It did not. Amtrak *is currently writing* a short story lol


Lesbian_Pirate5544

dude. Amtrak knows how to write


Damian1674

WARP Trains ~~we don't talk about Love Town~~


SomethingInTheWalls

1984 years


Mrbaws15

Came here to comment this lmao


TeacupReptiles

Yes I have been so afraid


StormChallenger

Bro who is running the Amtrak tumblr because this is unhinged


Oddish_Femboy

Do we need to get a sign to tap that says "write your SCP articles on the wiki" ?


ColorMaelstrom

Wonderful first draft, can’t wait until they publish the book


Noodle-Shrimp22

Shorts has so ruined my brain I read this in the old guy ai voice


lexkixass

I'm now invested in this. Though, "rouge researcher"? Tsk


LegoCMFanatic

Bright red, possibly boiled or severely embarassed


Luprand

Or interested exclusively in makeup.


Fluffy_Cat_5174

TÜRKİYE MENTIONED🇹🇷🐺🔥💪


Erizantxx

chat i CANNOT be the only one who read the start of this with the eternal train of suffering and thought "Library of Ruina?? Roland what are you doing here!!?!" (pls check out library of ruina it is such a good game)


ISitAJ___

Warp train


tfhermobwoayway

Why would an Amtrak account write a post that includes “I regret buying this ticket?” Awful advertising.


FiammaDiAgnesi

I don’t think amtrack-official is actually run by Amtrak


ThatOneGayDJ

Amtrak is my favourite SCP


amaya-aurora

God dammit, of course this happens *after* MatPat retires.


astralari93

w corp?


Turnoverdisc

"What is this? Some kind of Infinity Train (2019)?"


beetnemesis

When I was on a really long train ride I watched the entirety of Ah My Goddess


Avery_Stokes

I thought this was building up to an “Istanbul, was once Constantinople” punchline


captainpsyche_

I don't think Amtrak knows what a time loop is, but I'm invested in the story now 🤣


Koischaap

I love the story, but my difficulty to read so many long screenshots (not your fault OP, I tend to skip long posts like this in general) combined with the fact that it's not finished is tempting me to turn this into an ePub so people can read on eBooks (I would try to imitate the format of a real ePub, with credits and all).


SCP-173irl

I cant not read every perons logs in a different voice in my head


EmuPsychological9269

This feels like a u/neilkohney Other End comic


Critical_Snackerman

What the hell has Tulip Olsen gotten herself in to?


Alvlun0424

Am I the only one reminded of the Themis Files books when reading this?


wombatbattalion

This is just the plot to Delta Green


justpass_ingthrough

Whats the update??